Michelle Elvy
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Roll with it: A Cube Story |
Roll the die. Three. Past present future. Which you gonna take? Past is dead even if Faulkner says it ain’t so. Present is a blinding maze. Future? Don’t even go there….Roll again. Six. Count the days since you spoke to each other. An eternity, a six-day war of silence. Draw a line in the sand and stay where you are. Don’t talk don’t listen don’t blink, don’t break don’t breathe don’t think.Just throw the die again…One. Easy. No chances taken, no games. Never mind what Donne said. You arean island.Five. Can’t sleep, you slip in and out of this moment. There’s a roulette table in your dreams, black-red-black-red-black. Five words in a promise: I will never leave you. Never say never, you’d thought but hadn’t said.Four. You roll again, blow for luck which works ’cause this time you’re back in Carolina, out behind the old Route 4, kneeling in red dirt, your brother grinning and the worms in the pot wriggling, Papa and Pattie calling you to supper. The past is dead but it’s a good dream still.Wake up and roll again. Dreams aren’t real, this is. Game’s about to end so you hold the die, squeeze it, squint. Roll and… two, not what you expect. Early morning light coming through the blinds, and he’s walking through the door. Take his hand, wake up. |
Charlie’s Travels (from week #31 – Missed the bus) |
Charlie Hancock missed the bus. Started walking. |
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Charlie Hancock boarded the bus, sat in a seat in the back, the same seat he always chose. |
He didn’t stop anywhere or talk to anyone, just kept walking. |
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He looked around at the familiar faces, the ones he saw every evening on the Number 9, felt a pang of guilt — but only a small pang. |
Out past the town line, to where Main Street turned to gravel and then dirt. |
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He remained calm as the bus came to a stop at the corner of Pine. He slid down low in his seat and waited for the next passenger. |
He came to a field, sat under the shade of a large oak and began to cry. |
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Sweat beaded his brow as he watched the man board the bus — this man whom he’d planned to follow home and shoot for all the right reasons. |
He pulled out the gun, tossed it far as he could, forsaking revenge. |
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But on this night the man was carrying a bundle which cooed and smiled while he paid the driver. |
Then Charlie wiped his brow, stood up and walked toward the grassy spot where the gun had fallen. There’s always tomorrow, he thought. Tomorrow I might not miss the bus. |
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And Charlie, losing all resolve for all the right reasons, decided then and there against revenge. |
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Tell me what you think (from week #27 – Lost in translation) |
“Dites moi ce que vous en pensez,” said the old woman. “Tell me what you think.”The girl had been gazing at the canvas, an astonishing explosion of color amidst a grey background of tattered cardboard and greasy clothing and tired plastic bags, and she now sensed the woman’s gaze on her. What could she say? That she wanted to press her cheek into the cool ocean purples, put her lips to the milky sky and drink? That the sweep of greens and browns rising up with the sun’s golden fingers parting the trees just so hinted at the home she’d left and nearly forgotten? That the feathery texture of the grasses down low reminded her of the brush of her lover’s hand on her neck, that she was sure that the depression in those tall wildflowers was made by him and her, right there. And that the line of black birds off in the distance placed a thin, cold emptiness in her chest which had nothing to do with the November Parisian morning?For a moment, she wondered if she could take this woman around the corner and buy her a hot tea, sit with her and talk about the color of warmth and love and home, of sorrow and loneliness and fear. She wanted to know how an old woman could capture everything that was in a girl’s heart in such a small square. Instead, she tossed a coin into the woman’s worn grey cap and muttered: “Oui, c’est bon.” |
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CUBE SQUARE ROOTS
You each met the challenge with stunning stories. All are so vastly different but equally beautiful.
Michelle’s gave me the ally I need after a tough morning.
John’s lifted me out of the hot blaze burning my feet.
Walt’s is a fragrant dream of all our pasts to return to.
Thank you, Susan xoxo
May 11, 2011 at 12:20 pm
Really great work in this final challenge laid before you all. A special treat!
May 11, 2011 at 6:10 pm
Challenges well met! Interesting takes on the prompts.I think my favorite though was- well, nevermind because I have too many to name. Beautifully done. :)
May 12, 2011 at 9:37 am
Well done. Where’s the fav button? lol
May 21, 2011 at 12:58 am